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He leads me to the car wreck with Ryan and two other unrecognizable men on stretchers, Ellie no where to be found.
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He leads me to the wreckage, the mangled mess of steel, rubber, and plastic is hardly recognizable as once having been a car. I look over at ryan, he and two other victims are being loaded onto stretchers, I can't tell much about the other two except that they are male. With panic gripping at my throat I frantically search for Ellie but she is nowhere to be found.
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